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Monday, July 2, 2012

The Fourth Of July

How can a haiku take as much time to write as a story?   :)



The Fourth Of July


Fireworks stun the sky;

brilliant, ephemeral life,

so sweetly ablaze!





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2 comments:

  1. Nancy GrossmanJuly 2, 2012 at 8:37 PM

    I love the idea of a stunned sky! A lovely ode (I know it's not REALLY an ode it's a Haiku) to fireworks!!! They are awesome!!!

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  2. Susan MatthewsonJuly 7, 2012 at 5:43 PM

    Nancy's right--stunned is the perfect verb for this cheerful little nugget of a haiku. Well done.

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